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STORY HELP!!! PLEASE!!!?
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Hey!
I am kinda stuck in a situation in my story,.
It is a novel about 10 people who can fly, conjure spells and so on,
But I need a name for what they are called.
Something like "Stardust spirits" Like in Linda Chapmans books. But I can’t call it that because it will be plagiarizing
So if you could think of a name they could be called that would be great! Nothing to boyish or to girly. Thanks
PLEASE ANSWER WITH LOTS OF SUGGESTIONS!!!
Cheers, :)
Hanna G
Lol, There is four main characters, the other 6 are just other random people.

Ehh, that sounds like way too many characters for a reader to have to keep track of during a novel. I think you should drastically cut that number to a few main characters, IMO, no more than three. Fewer characters means fewer names they have to memorize, because I’ve found myself getting confused during books that switch from character to character, each with their special ability, and going back and re-reading who this character is and how they relate to the story. This is a hindrance to the reader. THink about it, even Harry Potter has only 3 main characters, even though it could easily have a dozen. Twilight only has 2 (3 if you count Jacob) main characters.

Keep the number to as few as possible or you’ll confuse your reader.

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7 Comments for 'STORY HELP!!! PLEASE!!!?'

  1.  
    nhi
    February 27, 2010 | 9:46 am
     

    stardust spirits. . sooo girly ;P lol

    supa leet soulja’s boyish
    twinkle toes LOL xD
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  2.  
    Brienne
    February 27, 2010 | 9:56 am
     

    How about something like:
    Soul Watchers
    Life Guarders
    or maybe even Life Spirits
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  3.  
    anwaribnabdulla
    February 27, 2010 | 10:04 am
     

    call it my name
    anwar
    anwaribnabdulla@yahoo.co.in
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  4.  
    zack
    February 27, 2010 | 10:25 am
     

    try visiting http://www.booksie.com its a community of those who love to read and write novels, you can also seek advice about how to write and publish there as well.
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  5.  
    kangol'N'curls
    February 27, 2010 | 10:32 am
     

    Ehh, that sounds like way too many characters for a reader to have to keep track of during a novel. I think you should drastically cut that number to a few main characters, IMO, no more than three. Fewer characters means fewer names they have to memorize, because I’ve found myself getting confused during books that switch from character to character, each with their special ability, and going back and re-reading who this character is and how they relate to the story. This is a hindrance to the reader. THink about it, even Harry Potter has only 3 main characters, even though it could easily have a dozen. Twilight only has 2 (3 if you count Jacob) main characters.

    Keep the number to as few as possible or you’ll confuse your reader.
    References :

  6.  
    Moon godess
    February 27, 2010 | 11:18 am
     

    I think we need a bit more information but here are some suggestions:
    Soul Watches
    Dust of the Stars
    spirits of the stars
    spirits of life
    Conjure
    Spell watchers
    sorry thats all i can think of. i thought of a few more ideas so i answered your other question of this.
    thanks for the advice on my story it gave me loads of ideas. Thanks =)
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  7.  
    iheartchocolate
    February 27, 2010 | 11:40 am
     

    Soul Catcher

    Dream Spirits

    Star Nights
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